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Moon Dancer

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:icondontuse1plz::icondontuse2plz::icondontuse3plz:

:new: He has been adopted by :iconraptures-revenge:


This is Moon Dancer. He is another adoptable that hasn't been adopted yet.
He is now up for adoption for 25 :points: instead of 15 :points:. You must be willing to give him a good home, and I would very much like to see your first picture of him :meow:
You may NOT change his info if you adopt. The only reason exception is that you may change his name if you intend to register him with :iconhorseart-rpg: and the name is already taken.


Name: Moon Dancer
Gender: Stallion
Breed: Mustang/TB
Age: 4
Height: 15 hh
Color: Paint
Markings: Pinto
Discipline: Possibly endurance racing.
Passable Traits:
50% Pinto
20% Dapple gray
20% Gray
10% Full white
Sire/Dam: Starter
Bloodlines: n/a
Offspring: n/a
Other: Moon dancer is a secretive horse. He is very lazy during the day, but is very active at night. He came from an abusive home, and is wary of people. He will let you get close, but not close enough to touch or catch him. If you are lucky enough to catch him, he is very nevus when on the line. He is also scared to death of whips and crops, so you cant use them around him.

If he is not adopted he will stay with me and my stable. If I get around to getting him registered he will then permanently stay with THS.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I will take a deep breath and tell you what is right first:

The anatomy is perfect. If there are mistakes, they are so small I can't see them. The pattern is aslo very realistic, I am sure a real life horse could abort one just like this one.
But, of course, a good critic need to point the imperfections the writer can see, otherwise it is useless to write it.
I think the background is lacking of details. The grass would look better if it was a little more blurry at my eyes. Aslo, all of the grass tufts are perfectly identical, which make the drawing less pleasant to watch in my opinion, because no grass tuft is the same in real life. The foliage in the background should be blurred too. I find the sky to be kind of flat. It lack of shade. I believe making a gradient for it instead of using the same tone of dark blue would made it look better. Therefore, the biggest thing to improve in this piece is the roundness of the lines. The best example is on the shoulder. There is a apparent straight line in the pattern, and the front is even more. The drawing would look better if the lines were curvier.

Overall, it is good. Ok, we can't say you are the best horse artist here, but we can't say you suck neither<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>